Before anything I would like to tell everyone that this is my first ever story. Im not to confident with my self yet but if you enjoyed it than a rating would be nice. Also English is not my mother language. Ive studied English and lived in the USA for a few years. So if I do have any grammatical mistakes then please point them out to me and explain why. Dont be rude and say my English sucks and not give your reason. Say about opinions on the story. I accept all types of opinions whether they be complimenting my skills and effort or criticizing them. As long as you explain what made you think that way so I can further improve my writing As the direction the story will be heading to. It wont be non-stop sex every paragraph because this focuses more on the story than the sex scenes. Nonetheless there will be sex scenes. This first chapter is basically the introduction. ————————————————————————————————————- Light was seeping through my eyes, a blur in front of me was shaping into a. "Rick smiled. "I'll try to keep that in mind." He glanced at Sammi. "Tom, this is Sammi White. We go to the same school. Sammi, this is Tom Matthews from East Valley." Pleased to meet you," Sammi said, holding out her hand. Tom's eyes were a dark blue and seemed to twinkle. He was wearing a light yellow polo shirt and khaki pants."Pleasure's all mine," Tom said, giving her hand a gentle squeeze."I take it you don't like your draw."Tom shrugged. "I'll do my best, but I was hoping to do better than the seventh seed. How did you do today?" I was 2-2 in the round robin," she said. "Unfortunately I lost the match to the other gal who was 2-2 and she advanced on the tie breaker." Tough break." Yeah, but it was better than my first tournament. Last year when I went 0-4 and felt I'd been in over my head the entire day." I felt that way my first tournament," he said. "No matter how good you might be at school, going up against someone with a different coach is an eye-opener." Yeah, I didn't.
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